According to "The Artificial Production of Carbon Dioxide and its influence on Temperature" (pg.33-38) G.S Callender 1938. In this summary has been discussing the estimation of carbon dioxide witch changed the last half century. For example, rates and degrees per year that demonstrate effect in the temperature. In the page thirty-four there are details about absorption of gas in the temperature, and an important viewer. Also, A Angstrom's observation, and others witch is relative to this absorption in the atmosphere.
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Hi Carolina my name is Kalotina and I am being trained to be a tutor in my ENG220 class. I have read your blog entry and I am assigned to respond to it. By reading it I understand that you are trying to explain something about the change in temperature from carbon dioxide and appreciate your effort in trying to explain that.
ReplyDeleteAs an outside reader I do not have enough information on the whole topic. What was the main idea of the article? You go on to state that the change in rates in the degrees per year have shown the effects of carbon on temperature. How is that? How exactly has carbon affected the temperature? You then state that there are details about the absorption of gas on page thirty four. I have not read the article and you should explain the details so an outside reader like me can understand what you are talking about. After that, you prompt the reader to the article when you also mention that there is Angstrom’s observation and other ones relative to the subject, but you don’t explain what those observations are. I also don’t understand what the connection to the evidence you have chosen to write about is. You should add more information to your blog by summarizing the topic and analyzing the evidence that you chose. Lastly, you should always proofread your work before submitting it by reviewing some grammatical errors and punctuation in your sentences because it makes it difficult to understand what the sentence is about.